longest iv ever written on something

I wrote this for school. i have never wrote something so good in my life in my eyes. it says i dont smoke pot or drink but i have. i just didnt want my teacher to think i did.

but this is what i wrote.

what do u think? yes its very long....

After many many references to drugs at my school I have come to the point to come to my own conclusion on all this. I mean I am bored and here it goes. Throughout my high school life I have been around Marijuana and alcohol. I have never tried them in my life but being around it all the time makes me wonder exactly why itâ??s illegal. I mean I have seen people drunk and I have seen people high and definitely the people that are drunk seem to be more messed up than the high people. I mean I did some research and it proves that alcohol and THC (the stuff in pot that gets you high) are both natural earth ingredients. I mean alcohol comes from decay of fruits veggies etc and THC comes from certain plants. So these are both natural ingredients. I have learned that alcohol is a poison to our bodies while THC is just a chemical that has certain effects on our bodies. Studies have shown that the chemical THC has no negative effects in our bodies but actually has some big positive ones. Again I am not supporting either pot or alcohol here. But the reason why people say donâ??t smoke pot is because they say its bad for you, you will get cancer. Well yes! The smoke is definitely bad for your lungs hands down but I think its funny how people say this. I mean when you smoke a cigarette, you take many big inhales and big inhales for about 5 minutes and you are done with one cig. Some people can smoke a pack a day and not get cancer for 15 years. On the other hand a pot smoker (one of my old friends who smoked weed) will take 2 to 3 puffs and thatâ??s all they need. They wonâ??t do it for about another week or so sometimes longer. I also read that there has been no links to lung cancer from marijuana smoke. Would it be that people who use it donâ??t smoke enough because a little is all they need or is it that weed doesnâ??t have the same harmful properties as tobacco? Either one can be right and try and prove me wrong because I have researched this all over the internet. I also have noticed that why is tobacco legal? I mean have you ever seen what happens to someone if they eat it? They get terribly sick because the plant itself is poisonous and all the chemicals in it they use to process it. I have seen someone eat marijuana and they get very happy and love everything and seem to be at the highest of their spirits. Some people might say that there are chemicals in weed. I think that that is wrong also because weed is not produced in a factory where chemicals can get into it. But no it is grown in peoples backyards, hand picked and hand distributed to the public.

Now I wonder why alcohol is legal. I mean if someone drank too much alcohol they will have severe damage to the liver brain and other parts in the body. They can get very sick and sometimes die. After a night out with some friends I have noticed them drunk and they do the most stupid things they would never ever do in real life. I mean my friend took off his shirt and ran into a wall thinking it would help the others fall asleep. Now thatâ??s stupid to me. I think its funny how someone can drink all night pass out, wake up the next morning and have no idea what happened the previous night and feel very very sick for the whole next day. How is this leagal? I mean does weed do this to you? No, you just get really happy and want to eat a lot of food and suddenly country music is the best music ever. I have also learned that there are more DUI tickets for drunk people over every drug combined. Its simply because alcohol makes you make horrible decisions because it poisions you. Going off how my friends act, weed makes them physically and mentally there, its just the way they think about things and do things is different. I have never seen them in a better state while high. When they are drunk it seems like they are having a good time but they are totally different people while intoxicated. I mean you can drink too much and die. What happens if you smoke too much weed? Nothing. You get even happier than before because there is no way you can die from weed. It really makes me wonder why weed is illegal. I mean tobacco and alcohol are way worse in my eyes because of the fact that they bring no positive effects to you. Marijuana opens your mind says ($#)$%)($% it makes you feel like the best person in the world. I think that the reason why marijuana is illegal because of the harm it creates. I mean people get involved in illeagle activites because it causes violence. It doesnâ??t cause violence because your under the influence of pot but it causes violence because of the plant itself. I mean people will kill someone for this stuff. Legalizing pot will get rid of half of the people in prison today and by selling it in a controlled environment will be a huge chance to the world. There will be less violence there will be more peace and can chance the way every American thinks today.

A few things,
Im sure your underage, because this is nowhere near a college level essay,
Its extrememly obvious that you smoke pot,
and, frankly i would not turn this paper into any teacher ive ever had, its very personal as if you were talking to your friends, not writing a paper for school.

i could go off and say what i really think, but i dont have the time.
well done

It seems like a seventh grader wrote this...the longest and best thing you have ever written...I find that hard to believe if you are 18 years of age. During high school I had to write a 12 page paper with no errors and had a very strict guideline in order to graduate...that was the hardest thing i've ever had to write. I would not suggest turning that in..

true man lol, I'm 17, and kicked out of school, and that is a very horrible piece lol.

btw lol, I'm not retarded, some bs happened so I got kicked :(
found a new school though.

Study the facts of marijuana more, there are chemicals, but there are chemicals in everything, the harmful ones are the ones you don't want.
when you say no recorded cancer from marijauna smoke, thats not true, as they were also cigarette smokers, change it to no recorded cancer of marijuana alone.

English isn't my greatest subject, as its a 2nd language to me, but add reading to the list of things you do every day, it really helps.