random poetry by me

So i rest my head upon your shoulders thinking what could this empty feeling be? Why when i look into your eyes i see nothing? Are you their? or have you already left me? You hold my hand to your eyes to whipe away the tears. The answer is your as lost as me in this world of hateful fears. You feel the draft of the world coming in a full speed and it's tearing us apart. I try to reach for you helping the best i can. Your hand is slowly slipping as were being torn in two. Iv noticed your not reaching anymore, but for some reason my hand still remains. I think it's time for me to let go now, so hold on and please dont forget my name...

Wow...that's really good. Are you writing from personal experience? If writing is your passion, continue to do it. I also enjoy writing poetry and short stories. It's great therapy:)

I love to write i havnt been writing for awhile, and i think im going to start getting back into it. i have noticed the changes with in me when i dont write. I seem to be more hateful.. writing is a release for me.. as it is for many..

Personal experiance to answer ur question :)

and thank you

pretty good...u ever do that spoken word stuff...like def poetry jam, that stuff is the shit, you should do it...rspect

heres another one...


Long lost in the wind of truths, i stand alone here waiting for you
The days have gone and my knees are weak.
How much longer do i stay here and weep.
My tears roll down the cheeks..

Two days now and still no sign of life
I think ill walk home, in the rain of hope
cleaning my tears as the rain falls
I think iv lost you in this forbidden law.

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i have noticed the changes with in me when i dont write

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indeed
try painting/drawing when you're inspired next It's all about letting that flow I love to read the dark side of your writing

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Two days now and still no sign of life

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thats some good stuff!:thumbsup:
Hazz

i remember your eyes when i was young
Your smile made me laugh and filled me with joy
Mom, their is no other like the one i have
You have been their through the worst of the past

Now that ur gone i no longer feel
I can't see past the dark with in my soul

I look back thinking of the days
And now im here stranded all alone
Without you mom i thought it would be impossable
But im here now telling you iv made it and now im unstopable...

like memorys of the past, this hate for you will always last
It's been year's since iv seen you, but i know your still around
I feel your presence and i can't wait to just let all my pain out

You have hurt me, and killed my very soul
You have taken everything i had to live

Well im here now telling you im still standing
And next time i see you, you will know what it's like to be unlasting..

My deth perception is lost.
I no longer can tell what is real and what iv made up
Your faces are spinning, with words of truth
I know im lost, but it's the only way
So let me be, and hope i make it
Or join me, and maybe you too will become mistaken..

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Where am i? were can i be?
I feel as if im locked underneith a tree
Im looking up and all i see is dark
someone please help me, as if you can hear my crys
my hand reachs upwards looking for something to grab
oh god iv jsut noticed im falling into the benieth land..

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my heart has melted into two, leaving me with nothing but the feeling of blue
I no longer sleep or eat, i sit and wonder whats on he menu for the next week.
Will i still be here sitting and thinking? Lost into the mind of hatrid..
The mind with a thousand memorys, but only the ones that hurt are the ones i see
Bringing up the past as if it was tomorrow, sometimes i think it just might be to hard to swollow.
So give me the strenght to let go of these memorys, to let go of the past that haunts me so
IM tired of the nightmares that you bring me, the kicking and screaming, to all that knows.
So give me the strenght, but until then here i remain.. still kicking and screaming.. searching for the light at the end of this tunnel..

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