A song I wrote...pls leave feedback...im a musician

Well its about me and my girlfriend and how we're going through some shit in our life and the song just kinda plays with the idea of fate...in a goofy way...

Hope you like the lyrics

everyday we got to...find a road to
loop around the traffic...so we can hold our magic
and every day it seems...we dodge endings
so many u turns...we...cant imagine destiny

and i wonder if its meant to be
our destiny, we can tighten our ties
but i dont think, God sees what I see
When i look into your eyes

its tough when theres change..we gotta rearrange
theres no one to blame, were just a little late
its only our game, lets cooperate
but to me it seems this is love vs fate


we're no standard
sane sorry sample
shame on shay shes just
guilty of a pure hearted artist scandal
rock the funk steady
thats what its all about
make your heart wanna..wanna scream out loud
rock the funk steady
move to the beat
find the one you love...love the one you meet

choose the good life
reguardless anything
me n my girl ...are everything
make the world smile
rise to its feet
take your blindfold off
so you can see


its tough when theres change..we gotta rearrange
theres no one to blame, were just a little late
its only our game, lets cooperate
but to me it seems this is love vs fate


so just play along
you're the only one
im meant to be with you
you should know this hun


so help me sing oursong
it wont take too long
cuz in the end....yes the end
we will be so strong!

its tough when theres change..we gotta rearrange
theres no one to blame, were just a little late
its only our game, lets cooperate
but to me it seems this is love vs fate

do you have music for this or a chord progression? and is it open to suggestions for music, i would enjoy putting my own anrangement for it...

please can you listen to my bands song http://boards.cannabis.com/music-roo...irst-song.html and see if you can come up with some lyrics, i can't do lyrics ...
cheers dude

good words.

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Originally Posted by logie_boy

do you have music for this or a chord progression? and is it open to suggestions for music, i would enjoy putting my own anrangement for it...

please can you listen to my bands song http://boards.cannabis.com/music-roo...irst-song.html and see if you can come up with some lyrics, i can't do lyrics ...
cheers dude

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sure thing man, ill get back to you on that