new song

[systemofadown]

It was the first song I ever wrote, I wrote it when I was 12, tell me what you think...

www.myspace.com/dustinleew (http://www.myspace.com/dustinleew) "it's only you"

[Nochowderforyou]

The music isn't bad. Your band needs to work on getting to sound tighter, but I know, that takes a lot of practice time.

Vocals are kind of weak. It doesn't sound like the vocalist is giving it his all. Sounds like he's holding back. Consider getting a tuner with sound so their voice sounds in key. The singer was off key at a lot of times.

Other than than that, keep practicing! :thumbsup:

[systemofadown]

It's all me.