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BizzleLuvin
01-15-2007, 12:10 AM
so I asked my little brother again if he has any more songs that he would like to share. i told him about how i posted his work online and he got very angry at first, but after he read all the nice things you guys were saying, he cheered up and even blushed a little. so here's another song from a few months ago.

bling bling
platinum rings
i gotta get me some of those things.
gotta shine, gotta glow,let everybody know
that I've got class and money
that i'd steal your honey,
take her to bar in my expensive car
buy her salads and drinks
and make her think that she was falling in love with me
but in reality,
she's just loving my money.
my collar stays popped,
my trigger's never locked
as to keep my enemies
from robbing my stocks.
low classes, high classes
in reality they're all asses.
they lie and cheat
steal your shoes right off you feet
then youre broke and cold,
but nobody cares
nobody wants to know.
we want celebrities and reality t.v.
to watch on our big screens
sipping champagne
placing the blame
on taxes
on the president,
or how much we pay for rent
but we dont realize our moneys been spent
on things of material,
cars, jewelry, things that make us feel
adequate, important, wanted and rich
but when our houses burn down, life's a bitch.

blazed620
01-15-2007, 03:44 AM
hard to find ne kind of flow in this.

partyguy420
01-15-2007, 04:46 AM
it wasnt to bad... but it dosent flow all that good...

the yeag
01-15-2007, 04:50 AM
ice ice baby..

JeenYuss
01-16-2007, 01:06 AM
so how olds yr brother like 7?