Finally have some music of mine online

[Hardcore Newbie]

http://www.kawlinz.com is my site.

http://www.kawlinz.com/music/rhymesotight.php is the direct link to the song page.

The music is me an my buddy rhyming over a hip hop beat i made with another buddy of mine playing on guitar, criticisms are welcome :D

[melodious fellow]

so fucking sad no one replied...

I play music... you play other music as of lately?