Rate my freestyle..

[CYRAX]

Hey guys, I've been rhyming for 2 and a half years now, I prefer writting over freestyles considering the upgrade in complexity and multi's/meta's, but I did one the other day, decided to post it on here for a rate.

Most people think I'm actualy not half bad but your opinion is fine with me.

1-10 :jointsmile:

[Matt the Funk]

Hey guys, I've been rhyming for 2 and a half years now, I prefer writting over freestyles considering the upgrade in complexity and multi's/meta's, but I did one the other day, decided to post it on here for a rate.

Most people think I'm actualy not half bad but your opinion is fine with me.

1-10 :jointsmile:

Hahaha there was something about it I liked, idk what. 7/10

[CYRAX]

thanks for the reply man..

[MastaChronic]

my speakers dont work, otherwise i would definitely hear it. sorry, but coming from you its gotta be pretty good

[thcbongman]

Your voice doesn't suit the beat, but I like it, good rhymes, laid-back flow.

[CYRAX]

Thanks for the feedback.

[budsmoker only]

that wasnt bad at all.. there were some points were you stalled a bit but thats pretty tight..

[CYRAX]

that wasnt bad at all.. there were some points were you stalled a bit but thats pretty tight..

Thank ya :)

[Matt the Funk]

thanks for the reply man..

oh and sorry if that came of negative since I was "hahahahing" it's just funny that someone posted their rap on a cannabis forum. Haha ahahaha I just find it humourus idk why

[CYRAX]

oh and sorry if that came of negative since I was "hahahahing" it's just funny that someone posted their rap on a cannabis forum. Haha ahahaha I just find it humourus idk why

Yeah I posted it on here just because I wanted to people to know my voice/flow considering I do alot of rhyming in here, mostly in text.

It's all good.

[AlwaysBlazed]

sounds good man,

try speeding it up 1.4x normal

it sounds amazing

[CYRAX]

sounds good man,

try speeding it up 1.4x normal

it sounds amazing

Thanks..

[Mista Sippi]

good shit mayne keep flowin

[CYRAX]

good shit mayne keep flowin

thanks :p

[187]

i don't like what u rap about

[CYRAX]

i don't like what u rap about

That's straight, I'd just like to know what type of rap you listen to, lol.

[187]

mf doom is probably my favorite rapper

[Mista Sippi]

check out me and my homeboy sir sippa. recorded this back before i started rappin as mista sippi, but it's still jammin shit. i'm first to go, then my boy end the shit. leave some feedback lemme know what yall think if ya like it i might post some others we recorded

[Mr.Jesus]

lil breath in the mic but other than that nice. i like teh lyrics *thumbs up*

[Mista Sippi]

yeah we ain't got no money for studio time, so we recorded the shit at my crib (why it sounds like that)

[CYRAX]

I got more tracks someone let me know if you're interested.

[Juggalo k00kie]

hmmmm, not what i'm usually into =/ but ok i'd say a 7/10 on the lyricism, but the beat just killed it for me

[Juggalo k00kie]

you know what.. since you're cool... i think i'm gonna make a beat just for you... i hope it doesn't suck XD

[Juggalo k00kie]

nevermind... i got lazy, maybe tomorrow lol

[CYRAX]

that would be very nice. I'd apreciate it. I use limewire and soon I'm gonna have to pay for official beats for my next tape.

[cannabis campbell]

LOL were you stoned when you did this? you sound like it.. seriously, you could do with speeding it up a bit but you got a nice style though, sound quite a lot like T.I are you from the south?, 8/10

[Acouwaila]

Do you kill people? Do you have real gats?

If not...then why would you rap about it

music is an artform...and hip hop shouldnt be about expressing whats NOT YOU

other than that nice flow and rythm

I like your voice too


Tip: Find something that you really connect with...maybe its family...maybe its friends youve lost, maybe its religion or your beliefs....rap about shit that you can FEEL...

not money, ho's, and gats...those ones are for the songs with crunk beats lol

[Sir Bliss]

I'm so high and I just blasted that shit, but I had a differernt song too so it was hard for me to listen. All I really heard was springs on Shaq's bed, so for that, 9/10

Seriously though...sounded good

[Juggalo k00kie]

Do you kill people? Do you have real gats?

If not...then why would you rap about it

music is an artform...and hip hop shouldnt be about expressing whats NOT YOU

other than that nice flow and rythm

I like your voice too


Tip: Find something that you really connect with...maybe its family...maybe its friends youve lost, maybe its religion or your beliefs....rap about shit that you can FEEL...

not money, ho's, and gats...those ones are for the songs with crunk beats lol

music doesn't have to be real all the time, or only about what you do, it's fun to flip the script every once in awhile... like Sutter Kain :cool: serial killers and rapists are out there why not talk about it? if you get offended easily.. well that's your problem, and why the mainstream hides it

[Acouwaila]

music doesn't have to be real all the time, or only about what you do, it's fun to flip the script every once in awhile... like Sutter Kain :cool: serial killers and rapists are out there why not talk about it? if you get offended easily.. well that's your problem, and why the mainstream hides it

Like I said...the songs that aren't real are the songs with great beats lol..

The thing is...we need more REAL artists rather than WANNA BE-ARTISTS

Turn on the radio and you're gonna hear some faggot rapping about his rims and his watch

If you REALLY want to make an impact in "the game" then find something you feel.....people can tell if you feel your music or not...trust me...thats what seperates the true artists from the fake.

[Juggalo k00kie]

depends what you mean by unreal, listen to Sutter Kain, The Flatlinerz, they don't have flashy beats

[CYRAX]

Like I said...the songs that aren't real are the songs with great beats lol..

The thing is...we need more REAL artists rather than WANNA BE-ARTISTS

Turn on the radio and you're gonna hear some faggot rapping about his rims and his watch

If you REALLY want to make an impact in "the game" then find something you feel.....people can tell if you feel your music or not...trust me...thats what seperates the true artists from the fake.

I've done my time, and I regret some of it, and probably one of the main reason I rap on those subjects is because of how many fake kids there are that are out of line...

you think they rap about guns, killing, money all for the show, but you wouldn't know it can turn into a lifestyle.

and whoever said I sound like TI, no I'm not from the south, I'm East Coast actualy.

[pass_the_dubbie]

I liked it although it was a little distorted or something...I dunno maybe you were too close to the microphone but just try to be clearer.

[Hardcore Newbie]

Pretty decent for a freestyle. I prefer writing too, most people do. You can just get so indepth with it, but improving something on the spot will always be appealing.

[CYRAX]

^Thanks guys I know whatchur talking bout.

[snowblind]

sorry man definately not what i like, gotta say i think its kinda weak.

but im more into stuff like the forgien beggar, format, big gun

there all uk so u mite not get em over there, but if u can get anything off asylum speakers by forgein beggars its awesome, check out frosted perspects

[Juggalo k00kie]

man.. honestly.. i can't understand 50% of what british rappers say

CYRAX, about your sig, beef does make money, there are alot of rappers that were broght to attention because of beef

[snowblind]

what are you talking about, british rap is ill. but i would say it is mainly hip hop, apposed gangsta rap nonsense. i know people grow up with things like that all around them. but the music just perpetuates the cycle and makes trashy white boys thing there ard. we call em chavs
check out df format all his words are prononced and listenable, fuck that all the artistes i said are. i guess its horses for courses, but the uk scene represents alot more vibrancy than the majority of the stuff i here from the states,
but thats just my opinion
seriously thouh check out forgein beggars, met them in mayhrhoffen at snowbomb, fucking ill

[unlockit]

Got more cannabis licks, raps , flows ?

[CYRAX]

man.. honestly.. i can't understand 50% of what british rappers say

CYRAX, about your sig, beef does make money, there are alot of rappers that were broght to attention because of beef

No shit but am I a mainstream rap star? no..

Beef here isn't so jolly and we don't settle it over TV interviews or shit like that, it's more reality.

[CYRAX]

what are you talking about, british rap is ill. but i would say it is mainly hip hop, apposed gangsta rap nonsense. i know people grow up with things like that all around them. but the music just perpetuates the cycle and makes trashy white boys thing there ard. we call em chavs
check out df format all his words are prononced and listenable, fuck that all the artistes i said are. i guess its horses for courses, but the uk scene represents alot more vibrancy than the majority of the stuff i here from the states,
but thats just my opinion
seriously thouh check out forgein beggars, met them in mayhrhoffen at snowbomb, fucking ill

British rap is some dudes trying to fit in because their not in the land of origin of the music, sorry if that is disrespecting you but any one who could spit would say it's some wack shit... some s-club shit.

[Raider187]

Practice more, its not that good dude. I'll try and put some shit up.

[CYRAX]

Practice more, its not that good dude. I'll try and put some shit up.

I'd take what you say into consideration, but I'd rather listen to your shit first because I don't know if you can spit or not. Talk is cheap in this area of entertainment. ;)

[snowblind]

CYRAX that is absolute bullshit.

complete bollocks, fair enough the music orginated from the us,

don't mean you own it.

i bet u aint ever listened to any other the artists i mentioned, yet they got deals, they play clubs and they rip it up.

your in your room, with crap beats and slow ass rhymns, you lack flair or style. its just a monotonos drone.

you rekon the uk scene is sclub.

ok come to the uk, come to a few clubs, get on stage and say that.

i know its easy to stay stuff on the web, where recorse is minimal, but dude. thats weak

i mentioned those artists cus u mite feel inspired or creatively spured on my em.

they all do somin different and mix it up, through beats, backing, samples, lyrical scores and rhytmns and tone of language.

you on the other hand sound like every deep voiced 2cent rapper i ever heard. rapping bout jail, guns, weed, money, hoes.

its fucking boring

no british rapper is trying to fit in, we took what you made, improved it then pwned it.

50 wannabe

snowblind

[CYRAX]

CYRAX that is absolute bullshit.

complete bollocks, fair enough the music orginated from the us,

don't mean you own it.

i bet u aint ever listened to any other the artists i mentioned, yet they got deals, they play clubs and they rip it up.

your in your room, with crap beats and slow ass rhymns, you lack flair or style. its just a monotonos drone.

you rekon the uk scene is sclub.

ok come to the uk, come to a few clubs, get on stage and say that.

i know its easy to stay stuff on the web, where recorse is minimal, but dude. thats weak

i mentioned those artists cus u mite feel inspired or creatively spured on my em.

they all do somin different and mix it up, through beats, backing, samples, lyrical scores and rhytmns and tone of language.

you on the other hand sound like every deep voiced 2cent rapper i ever heard. rapping bout jail, guns, weed, money, hoes.

its fucking boring

no british rapper is trying to fit in, we took what you made, improved it then pwned it.

50 wannabe

snowblind


Yes I admit that was low, and perhaps there are some good UK emcee's, but calling me a 50 wannabe lol?!, like he said himself, no one does him better then he does, so I think I'm straight with being myself thanks.

[snowblind]

he dont even do it that well. when i was at reading a few years ago, we bottled him of the stage before he had even finished his first song. it was class he stopped half way through sat down, called up mofo's then walked off. someone through a deck chair at him. you could hardl see him for the bottles in the air.
reading is a rock festival but they always have different bands on, j5 played earlier in the day and went down a storm.
he just perpetuates sterotypes, and bollocks, shame they didnt shoot him 9 times and finish the job

[CYRAX]

Damn I would get shot 9 times if I knew I was gonna live and make 90 mil in within afew years. XD

[Raider187]

The greatest rappers of all time never got shot. And 50 cents lack of lyrical ability proves that rappers today dont need talent. They just need an image that appeals to simple minded fans that think its cool, such as being shot. I have family members that have been shot and none of them enjoyed it.

I also got one song up in the "Evil Empire" thread. Go rate it.

[CYRAX]

The greatest rappers of all time never got shot. And 50 cents lack of lyrical ability proves that rappers today dont need talent. They just need an image that appeals to simple minded fans that think its cool, such as being shot. I have family members that have been shot and none of them enjoyed it.

I also got one song up in the "Evil Empire" thread. Go rate it.

That's pretty obvious, huge amount of pain, but like I said, if I knew I was gonna live and make that much cash please feel free!

[Juggalo k00kie]

No shit but am I a mainstream rap star? no..

Beef here isn't so jolly and we don't settle it over TV interviews or shit like that, it's more reality.

LOL i can tell you're not, but alot of underground legends became known of through beef, Sutter Kain for example, who has a long running conflict with Necro

[CYRAX]

LOL i can tell you're not, but alot of underground legends became known of through beef, Sutter Kain for example, who has a long running conflict with Necro

Oh hell yeah, serious jones was all about beef when he hit the underground at first, and his verses where insane.

[Juggalo k00kie]

most underground beef nowadays is bitches with big heads that make a diss and put it on their little MySpace and try to act badass

[CYRAX]

most underground beef nowadays is bitches with big heads that make a diss and put it on their little MySpace and try to act badass

That's definetly true, but some of them really got talent off the head, only some.

[Juggalo k00kie]

yeah, ever heard of Sideshow Records? they're some bitches