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IntrepidS
11-07-2004, 07:50 PM
So I have to write this speech for stupid English class, about a poem. So I chose this poem because I thought it had to do with the the theme of violence, but I'm probably wrong.
Here it is
Apprently with no Suprise
Apparently with no surprise
To any happy flower
The Frost beheads it at its play-
In accidental power-
The blonde Assasin passes on-
The sun proceeds unmoved
To measure off another day
For an Approving God.
I have a few of my own opinions but I'm not sure if they're ready to go into words just yet. So please lend me yours.
Thanks guys.
mikee1422
11-07-2004, 07:54 PM
Dude that's some pretty deep stuff, lifes realities can only be yours....
00Ampersand
11-07-2004, 08:06 PM
add" and then, three lesbians popped out of the glowing ambers of the sun, and serviced each other...sexually"
~007~
bob banana
11-07-2004, 08:07 PM
add" and then, three lesbians popped out of the glowing ambers of the sun, and serviced each other...sexually"
~007~
hahahahahahaha
damn man, thats all u ever think off?
mikee1422
11-07-2004, 08:08 PM
You're Funny!!!! :rolleyes: :o :o
add" and then, three lesbians popped out of the glowing ambers of the sun, and serviced each other...sexually"
~007~
ermitonto
11-07-2004, 09:03 PM
I remember one time in high school I had to write a poem, so I made it so that when you read the first letter of every other line backwards it said THIS ASSIGNMENT SUCKS.
methusla
11-08-2004, 01:31 AM
try another poem. That is a most depressing statement. I hope don't have any wmd's in your house.
Bro DZ
11-08-2004, 05:47 AM
looks good IntrepidS
i say leave it as is and take it to school
Peace
toejam
11-08-2004, 06:07 AM
add" and then, three lesbians popped out of the glowing ambers of the sun, and serviced each other...sexually"
~007~
and I thought you meant they serviced each others cars.
toejam
11-08-2004, 06:21 AM
Men are the happy flowers and women are the frost.
Imotep
11-08-2004, 10:36 AM
Thats very stirring.
I liked it.
:)
Imotep, destroyer of worlds
Byker
11-08-2004, 04:22 PM
So I have to write this speech for stupid English class, about a poem. So I chose this poem because I thought it had to do with the the theme of violence, but I'm probably wrong.
I have a better poem --
All was well with the wrinkled old Dutchess
When trapped in the fiend's evil clutches.
'Til he turned on a light,
Took one look, said good night --
So she hit him with one of her crutches.
Kind of about violence, and easier to remember. I say, write your essay about that one.
Byker
11-08-2004, 04:25 PM
Originally Posted by 00Ampersand
add, "and then, three lesbians popped out of the glowing ambers of the sun, and serviced each other...sexually"
and I thought you meant they serviced each others cars.
That would be more useful, actually. I mean, I could handle two lesbians, but don't ask me to fix their cars.
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