NEW SONG!!

[Wesley Pipes]

Ok same deal as the last one, guitar and vocals recorded seperately (through my shitty webcam mic) so had to match them up as best i could, which is a pain in the ass btw lol...

so anyway this ones called "Not Quite Right"...

Enjoy :)

http://www.bolt.com/WesleyPipes/audio/2299829
(hope this link works cuz i couldnt upload it here, dunno why :confused: )

....and constructive critism only plz, if u think its shit, then say it in a nice way and tell me why you think it's shit :D

(posted it here cause hardly anybody checks out the music forum, so please mods dont move it yet.... pretty please :o )

[Lethal G]

I actually really like this. For a shitty webcam mic, that thing has a great reverb and is fairly clear. My $50 mic doesn't even come up that clear lol. On top of that, the song itself was really good. Sounds like some good music to toke to honestly, and I might just have to do that tonight :) You've got a great voice dude. Keep up the good work :thumbsup:

[JuggaloAtTheDoor]

ya good song, both ones u've put up here r good man

[Wesley Pipes]

thx guys :)

i think i'm gonna do a cover of Snow Patrol _ Run for my next one... fuckin love that song :D

[Lethal G]

^both songs?

You mean to tell me you have another song besides this one?

Gimme! :D

[Wesley Pipes]

lol yeah dude, you've heard it, the link in my sig.... dam stoners and their memories lol :D

[Wesley Pipes]

and as for the reverb, thats mostly to do with my amp having built in effects and a nice sound to it, not to mention a program called Digital Audio Editor ;)

[blazed620]

wow..that was intense....good song...I like to write songs too lol...

[Wesley Pipes]

cool thx, that song was inspired by my last bout of insomnia lol :rolleyes:

do u play any instruments? if u do u should try recording too :)

[Lethal G]

lol yeah dude, you've heard it, the link in my sig.... dam stoners and their memories lol :D

LOL, you're right, I've heard this one too. Me and my stoned moments :p it's suprising I still make straight A's in college with a memory sometimes as bad as this.

Yeah, I use various programs for audio editing as well. The one I think I like the most has to be Adobe Audition. An amp would explain those nice, smooth reverb effects as well.

By the way, I saw a really good mic in a music store the other day for about $150. It was a high-quality electric condenser mic with a built-in USB interface. It seemed awesome. I'd recommend it to you if you were looking to get a new mic. Whatever you do though, don't buy a dymanic unidirectional mic for digital recordings no matter what someone tells you. They sound like cheap karaoke lol.

[Wesley Pipes]

LOL, you're right, I've heard this one too. Me and my stoned moments :p it's suprising I still make straight A's in college with a memory sometimes as bad as this.

Yeah, I use various programs for audio editing as well. The one I think I like the most has to be Adobe Audition. An amp would explain those nice, smooth reverb effects as well.

By the way, I saw a really good mic in a music store the other day for about $150. It was a high-quality electric condenser mic with a built-in USB interface. It seemed awesome. I'd recommend it to you if you were looking to get a new mic. Whatever you do though, don't buy a dymanic unidirectional mic for digital recordings no matter what someone tells you. They sound like cheap karaoke lol.

lol yeah i used to have one of those nasty mics when i was practisin with my band still... sounded fuckin awfull... and when i'm back to work i'll be on the lookout for one of those decent mics, maybe get a couple of em so i dont have to spend fuckin ages matchin up the music and vocals lol :thumbsup:

[LuckyNiner]

You know, that really wasn't bad, at all. Catchy, melodic, kinda sad. You've got a great voice. For some reason the song reminded me of Lifehouse. Keep it up, man.

[Wesley Pipes]

Thx, and i intend to keep it up, especially when a certain girl comes to my house :p ;)

[MaryJaneintheCloset]

You know, that really wasn't bad, at all. Catchy, melodic, kinda sad. You've got a great voice. For some reason the song reminded me of Lifehouse. Keep it up, man.

Ohh I love Lifehouse, and I agree. I liked it a lot Wes, keep up the great work!!! :)

[Wesley Pipes]

Thx MJ, greatly appreciated, all my friends at work keep saying i should go on x-factor lol :o

[Nochowderforyou]

That was a pretty good somg there Wesley. A suggestion though, the guitar playing was good, but maybe for the opening chords of the song, and the first few lines of the first verse, try picking each string seperatly, or, if you can, try using your finger tips to pick each string, like classical style. I think that will give it a nice buildup to the chorus and remaning song. It will start off super mellow and soft, then when the end of the first verse comes, start strumming them chords. You know what I mean? :)

From one musician to another. Just a suggestion. I just found the strumming of chords the same throughout the song. A little simple diversity can go a long ways.

Keep up the great work man! :thumbsup:

[Wesley Pipes]

That was a pretty good somg there Wesley. A suggestion though, the guitar playing was good, but maybe for the opening chords of the song, and the first few lines of the first verse, try picking each string seperatly, or, if you can, try using your finger tips to pick each string, like classical style. I think that will give it a nice buildup to the chorus and remaning song. It will start off super mellow and soft, then when the end of the first verse comes, start strumming them chords. You know what I mean? :)

From one musician to another. Just a suggestion. I just found the strumming of chords the same throughout the song. A little simple diversity can go a long ways.

Keep up the great work man! :thumbsup:

yeah man, i see what u mean ;), but i'm not that great at picking, what i do is like... the skeleton of the song, it needs bass, drums, and more importantly, some lead guitar which is why i left alot of the song as just me strummin so a lead guitarist could come in and play around with it... and hey, if ya wanna have a go at puttin some lead stuff on it, be my guest dude, same goes for any drummers and bassists, we could get a can.com band goin here lol :)

just remember, i have rights to this song, and this thread alone is legally proof of copyright lol! :p ;)

[yoda]

i think its 3 minutes into the song, but right after a chorus, its a bomb spot to have someone do a solo over. i do enjoy the song though. maybe its the mic quality, but some points it sounds like you strum too hard. good voice, but you lose your voice at parts. good song though.

[Wesley Pipes]

Lol... no-ones pefect tho :rolleyes:
but yeah i did strum to hard at some points, and during the last chorus i forgot what i was signing lol :o

and the mic isnt even as big as my thumb lol

But thx for the nice comments :D

Peace :coo:

[hipEstoner]

wwuts up with that southpark type character standing there

[Wesley Pipes]

lol, thats the southpark version of me, cant remember the site but u make your own southpark character... PP gave me the link a while back

[yoda]

lol, thats the southpark version of me, cant remember the site but u make your own southpark character... PP gave me the link a while back

i loved making my own SP dude, but oculdnt figure out how to save it

[Wesley Pipes]

i loved making my own SP dude, but oculdnt figure out how to save it

right click, "save picture as".... or something like that... or if ya can, just take a screenshot of the page, and crop it

[ladeela]

nicely done, I have made some songs, and it is hard!

[BabyFacedAbortion]

pretty:)

[cannabis campbell]

Love it mate seriously its gr8 10/10

do a song about weed for us all :)

[Wesley Pipes]

loli'll try dude, i got a tune that i'm tryin to put words to, it's kinda more punk rock upbeat tune tho, which i always think is harder to write lyrics to.

and thx for the 10/10 rating dude :)

[Wesley Pipes]

nicely done, I have made some songs, and it is hard!

you should post them too, like lethal g did, i would Love to hear more original music from ppl on this site :)



pretty:)

thx :o same to you ;)

[Pezzo]

lethal g's first post says it all

[Pezzo]

o btw is that u in the pic

[Wesley Pipes]

thx man, and yeah thats me lol :o

[Pezzo]

hey wesley ur kl i bin talkin to u over the forums and u always reply! u got msn or an email? jw

[LIP]

It's good man, i love it. I could easily listen to that on repeat for half hour.

:D

[Wesley Pipes]

It's good man, i love it. I could easily listen to that on repeat for half hour.

:D

lol thats what i do when i feel like listening to myself lol :)

[LIP]

:D:D

[MaryJaneScott]

mr pipes...

WHEN will the next song be out?

.... waiting patiently....

[Wesley Pipes]

mr pipes...

WHEN will the next song be out?

.... waiting patiently....

it will be in stores no-where near you no time soon :p

[Wesley Pipes]

nah but in all seriousness, i've got a few ideas for a couple songs, and i dunno what one to do first!

[MaryJaneScott]

just pick one...

and ROLL with it


i love
and then
i love
some more.

[Wesley Pipes]

hey it's not that easy u know, how bout u come here and help?

no? didnt think so :p

[Wesley Pipes]

hey i dunno if that link in my first post is working anymore, for some reason i cant upload music to that site anymore :confused:

but here i made a myspace music page :D
http://www.myspace.com/irrelevantconfusion

[thcbongman]

Hey, that's pretty catchy. Did someone ever mention you have a nice voice? Reminds me of Elliott Smith with a pleasant rasp to it. Very captivating.