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Dr HaZzMatT Esq.
05-06-2006, 05:54 PM
This day felt strange the moment I awoke,something in the air if you will,
I made my coffee and settled in to read my morning paper.
The phone rang
"Hello" I said
"Awe Yes I'm looking for Mr. Bradford Picks please!" the caller said
"oh No! I said "That's the old owner of my house! way back in 1948!"
(I live in a very old house)
There was a long pause
"Sir?" the caller replied
"Yes Bradford Picks was the first owner of my house but that was well over 70 years ago!" I said with question
"I'm sorry sir have a nice day" and the caller hung up quickly!
I was a bit unsettled from that for no apparent reason but continued with my coffee and paper
Latter that morning I went out to my garage ,I was experimenting with magnets and seeing if I could change or alter the polarity of a steel bolt in order to make it magnetic
I often sit in my shop (it's my converted 2 car garage) and build things and tinker.
I have many bench tools like my overhead drill press, a heavy duty vice and lots of hand tools and gadgets that I work with.
I turned on my radio to listen to some music and preceded to procure some tasty green bud and loaded up my purple bubbler, I also have 2 lava lamps in the shop that I got last year for Christmas that makes for a cool atmosphere. I started up with the connection of the 12V batteries to the shop bench and the electrode to the bolt just then there was a loud POP! then a low humming noise, thick blue smoke filled the shop
as I reached for the cables to disconnect it from the batteries I got a sharp shock.
"DAM!" I said as I waved my arms in the air clearing the thick smoke
I then walked over to the garage door and lifted it open
I preceded to walk out into the driveway
I looked around things looked strangely different!
The trees where much smaller and all the cars on the street where old
WTH?
Just then the mailman walked up and handed me my mail
"Good day Sir!" he said
"Awe Hi" I said a bit confused and felling out of place
I looked at the mail ..addressed to : Mr. Bradford Picks! I hesitated to stop him standing there holding the mail
Questions filled my head
Have I changed something with my experiments?
Have I traveled back in time? was I in a parallel universe?
I quickly ducked back into my garage closing the heavy overhead door behind me. I then took 2 large rips from my bubbler sitting back wondering what this day had in store for me. [/FONT]
Help me finish my story by writing one sentence, the way you think things would have happened...

GrimReefer420
05-06-2006, 05:55 PM
too much to read
srry lazy

Nochowderforyou
05-06-2006, 06:19 PM
I read the whole thing and even tried to come up with a finsihing sentence, but I'm struggling. :)

You see, the story has a pefectly fine finishing sentence..."...2 large rips from my bubbler sitting back wondering what this day had in store for me"<----that, I think IS the finishing sentence. If you would have left that last part out, then we could use anything to fnish the story, but you finished it for us.

That's how I saw it anyways. Trying to add a last sentence to that would just seem out of place.

Dr HaZzMatT Esq.
05-06-2006, 06:37 PM
That's how I saw it anyways. Trying to add a last sentence to that would just seem out of place.__________________

Point well taken!

That day has changed my life as I know it today!
Things have not been the same since
Hazz

PushaSimp
05-06-2006, 10:04 PM
wait.... so did that happen to you?(i thought it was just a story you made till what you said at the end of your last post)