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Kronik Bagz
09-11-2004, 06:25 AM
another day another broken fantasy,
some one please wake me an bring me to reality,
i got problems stacked in high piles all around me,
if someone was lookin
by now they shouldove found me,
but everyones blind to what i see in my past,
ive done fucked up things,
and in my head they will alwayse last,
all my life ive felt an outcast,
constantly i feel my soul bleeding,
mentaly beat down an harassed,
but look at what it did to me,
caged inside my own mind with noone to set me free,
a slave to so much i wish u could see,
i crave that lovely nicotine,
an like any other addict i have become a great fiend,
but no more weed,
how could this be,
tell me what u think about society,
im a good citizen cause im killing myself as long as i dont smoke trees,
im looked at as tha creepy guy waitin to currupt ur teens,
ive already been clipped, stabbed an left fer dead,
but goddamn im only nineteen
i pray everyday that someday someone can see inside my soul,
than maby soneone else will experience tha black hole,
noone sees tha inside u only see tha bull,
inside im crying out,
but i cant come to grips with it all on tha whole,
since noone wants to be tha criminal,
ill play that role,
lock me up as long as u keep me away from my dreaded soul,
every second i think about this bind,
im in to deep to leave my friends behind,
thats tha only thought keepin my from puttin this gat to my eye,
an leavin a hole in my skull three inches wide,
but tha last thing i want iz to make a man cry,
maby its just wishfull thinking fer me to try an stay alive,
sometimes i wish i could lay down an just die,
lonly, forsaken, an cold but i try
i pray for tha pain to go away,
but maby tha only reason i dont take my life,
its all about my pride,
if im dead an gone than societys won,
an fuck that im stayin here till my work iz done,
i feel tha only thing i can do iz run,
run from my problems but im standin strong,
ill look em in tha face until theyre completely gone,
maby open up peoplez eyes,
so they also can see past all tha lies,
that our beautiful earth has shed since tha beginning of time,
so i do this in my rhymes,
tha majority of u wont get this,
an ull think its a waste of time,
but to tha one or two who understand what im sayin,
this world iz a game of life,
so keep on playin,
an make sure u hang on tight......


iz it subliminal??? think about it.


off tha top of saints fucked up head

Kronik Bagz
09-11-2004, 06:53 AM
IM STILL ALIVE,
(an im standin with my pride)
IM STILL ALIVE
(an still waitin to die)
IM STILL ALIVE
(will tha sun ever rise?)

Ammie
09-11-2004, 07:23 PM
OMFG BAGZ IM GLAD IM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO FEELS THIS WAY. SO LOST THAT NO ONE CAN FIND ME AND BRING ME BACK TO LIFE.. I WANT SUMONE TO BREATH LIFE BACK INTO ME AND LET ME LIVE AGAIN.. I KNOW WHAT ITS LIKE TO BE ALONE AND EMPTY DONT WORRY BABE IM HERE FOR YA ;)

MUCH LOVE HOMEY XXXX

Kronik Bagz
09-11-2004, 07:38 PM
when someone understands thats what makes it feel like a good thing

Ammie
09-11-2004, 07:39 PM
well then its diffenetly a good thing <3

Lulu
09-11-2004, 08:14 PM
They're strong words Bagz
You're a nice person - don't forget, k? :)

Kronik Bagz
09-11-2004, 09:01 PM
ill try an keep that thought in my head,

but thanx fer readin an if ya feel my words like i do an u can see through all my negativity, i thank you.

Sedater18
09-11-2004, 09:06 PM
that was tight dude and I feel you

roll it up
09-11-2004, 09:46 PM
straight up man.that shit was tight bro.stay up,k? u cool as shit man

Kronik Bagz
09-11-2004, 10:13 PM
thanx bro

Ammie
09-11-2004, 10:23 PM
bagz dont u dare keep ur thoughts in ur head i enjoy readin what u write :p

Kronik Bagz
09-12-2004, 04:56 AM
k, i might write some more, but i think i need to put more thought into em. like i need to actualy WRITE it cause all tha stuff i put on tha boards are freestyle status, i play it by ear straight off tha top of my head

kyle
09-12-2004, 06:43 AM
yo man i feel that, made me think just readin it, you got some talent and some heart in yah, i
"ts all about my pride,
if im dead an gone than societys won,
an fuck that im stayin here till my work iz done,"
thats all you can do man, ill post some of my shit up but i dont wanna steal ur post, ill stick it on a new one, keep writin bro
Peace

Lola
09-12-2004, 07:03 AM
whoa amber is the color of your energy:D

Kronik Bagz
09-12-2004, 07:13 AM
i dont get it, "amber is tha color of ur energy"??? what iz amber???


lol

kyle
09-12-2004, 07:17 AM
i think its like a goldish brown colour, and its like fossilized sap, so u have amber the items and the colour lol

Ammie
09-12-2004, 08:20 AM
lmfao lol lola wtf did that have to do with anything hahahahahahaha :p:p

YES
09-12-2004, 05:58 PM
That was deep. And you do have talent.

But the dark times will pass and there will be a place of only love and weed.

Well, i like to think that.

Lola
09-12-2004, 06:00 PM
ahahahahahhahahahahaha ok i just ripped a big ass fart! and DAMN it smells like kfc:p




Ammie u think KFC is still open? Got bisquits? :D:D:D



BTW bagz thats some good words that u wrote...Keep it up! :)

KronicKing
09-12-2004, 06:02 PM
stanky panky =P hey lolaz try gettin a rim job and ask em how it taste =P

Lola
09-12-2004, 06:03 PM
omfg rim job, wtf do u know bout that? :D

u silly chilly;)

KronicKing
09-12-2004, 06:06 PM
lmao i know more than u think =P i may be young but i know me stuff =P,so bagz how many days till off proby? like 2-3?

Lola
09-12-2004, 06:12 PM
yeah bagz when is the fiesta?

Kronik Bagz
09-12-2004, 07:11 PM
a couple days, an a lil tip, if tha brown eye winks, tha whole room stinks, so have her poo THEN shower after she poos, an than, lick away. nuttin betta than lickin a gurls butthole

Islander
09-13-2004, 12:02 AM
Wow, I didn't bother reading the other reply's so I'm sure I'm not adding anything here by saying, wow man. Post more for sure.

Islander
09-13-2004, 12:05 AM
ahahahahahhahahahahaha ok i just ripped a big ass fart! and DAMN it smells like kfc:p




Ammie u think KFC is still open? Got bisquits? :D:D:D



BTW bagz thats some good words that u wrote...Keep it up! :)
lmfao, best post ever! The form, the techinque.... masterful post!
:D :D :D :D

Ammie
09-13-2004, 12:37 AM
oh snap !!!!

Lola i dont know lets g0 peep that out y0 ;)