H.M.O.

[STDzRus]

Honest Mankind Opinions...

Can I get some feedback here about this track I made a while back?

:pimp:

The mix is kind of bad and sometimes I go off topic but it's all off the top of my head and composed in less than 30 minutes.

Song: Joe Rabbit
Artist: STDzRus
CD: N/A

[Nochowderforyou]

I'll listen to it, hold on for a minute so I can listen, then I'll respond :cool:

[Musician]

no need to post a reply saying youre gonna listen to it nochow...

anyway im not into rap too much but its not bad, cept the same background music and the same rythm is goin for 2,41 min...

[STDzRus]

www.myspace.com/kazecomma for those who don't want to download. I just created that profile IDK man..it's something to do when I'm stoned besides just listening to rap.

Oh yeah...beat is courtesy Shadowville Productions...and thanks Musician.

[Nochowderforyou]

I'd listen to it, but my computer is being as fucking lame as shit. It's pissing me off and I'm ready to start smashing.

Sorry, all I could hear was a choppy beat, and some dog barking? :p

[STDzRus]

Yeah that's my old dog Joe, I had to put him on the track! Thanks for the effort though NoChow!

[Satan666]

it was alright.

[Awill3449]

The dog's alittle distracting and so are the breaks in the track...are the edits for swearing? I like the background track. How did you make it? Do you spin? Otherwise, its pretty good. Sounds alittle like the beat for that Eminem song that was famous for his movie (8-mile i think). Is there a chorus?

[kdizzle384]

that wasn't u rappin was it?

[STDzRus]

Yes that was me rapping and no that was not ANYTHING like the Eminem beat you are thinking of. The skips are because I recorded it on Acid Demo 4.0 and it fucked up now I got the full version but the second mix doesn't sound as good. There is no chorus it's just a flow and I plan on releasing more material sometime, when I feel like it, IDK...thanks...

Yes that was me rapping.

[Nochowderforyou]

Seriously, that was you rapping there STDz?

I managed to get a listen in last night and if that is you rapping, nice work! You have nice lyrical skills and isn't filled with swearing nonsense. It reminds me of some nice, underground hiphop. Nice job!

Peace.

[Nochowderforyou]

Got anymore? I just put that track on my player. :thumbsup:

[STDzRus]

Thanks I'm going to be releasing another song called "Enemies" about the suppression by government powers pretty soon. Still working on the content in my mind, I don't ever write my stuff down it's all in my head.

[STDzRus]

Got anymore? I just put that track on my player. :thumbsup:
Thanks for the support