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opiuser
11-29-2005, 07:53 AM
dont wake me up, let me trip thru my head...
All is black and numb but i notice the light.
It arises befor me, and slowly thru it i am lead.
On my left is the day, and evening lies to the right.

Push and pull as i lean away,
Driven back forth in my dismay.
I am overcome by this
I was not prepared for this...
No matter what i thought was coming for me.
None is known till i actually see.

And so i break free my earthly body.
To search for what I see to be godly.
Swim and writhe amongst the heavens.
I ascend unto the realms of the enlightened

50BagOfGreens
11-29-2005, 03:47 PM
once agian, im amazed

dev
11-29-2005, 05:34 PM
dont wake me up, let me trip thru my head...
All is black and numb but i notice the light.
It arises befor me, and slowly thru it i am lead.
On my left is the day, and evening lies to the right.

Push and pull as i lean away,
Driven back forth in my dismay.
I am overcome by this
I was not prepared for this...
No matter what i thought was coming for me.
None is known till i actually see.

And so i break free my earthly body.
To search for what I see to be godly.
Swim and writhe amongst the heavens.
I ascend unto the realms of the enlightened
cool story, poem or what ever but can u rephrase that so i know what ur on about plz

Cleveland
11-29-2005, 06:01 PM
shut

Cleveland
11-29-2005, 06:02 PM
the

Cleveland
11-29-2005, 06:02 PM
hell

Cleveland
11-29-2005, 06:03 PM
up!

50BagOfGreens
11-29-2005, 07:10 PM
^ hmmm you seem to be so imature that you cant appreciate good poetry

dev
11-29-2005, 11:39 PM
^ hmmm you seem to be so imature that you cant appreciate good poetry
LOL!! obviously not, it is a good poem looks like some people just dont like poetry

or maybe hes not high enough :D lol

fikusroot
11-30-2005, 02:52 AM
in all honesty it isnt that good of a poem