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gildong.
08-24-2005, 08:39 PM
yea..i got so much homework..math, history, english...and im having trouble with the english one..will someone help me? i have to get a 80% or higher or i fail..GAYY i know...anyways..if u guys can take the time and help me..that would be so nice...ill compare what ppl answered and see whats mostly right..its MULTIPLE CHOICE so if ur good at this stuff..it'll be easy! kinda LONG though..:[....if i fail..omg..lolz..anyways i suck at english..its about WRITING TRAITS...anyways here they are..iuno if anyone is gona reply lolz.
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Multiple Choice
1.Identify the correct writing trait that is being described: I received a 3 grade on my paper for this because I didnā??t have a thorough enough development of my topic/story. Man! Iā??ll have to work harder next time to completely develop what I want to say.
organization
ideas and content
voice
2.Identify the correct writing trait that is being described: I am so excited! I received a 5 on my paper for this because I truly put my personality into what I was writing!
organization
ideas and content
voice
3.Identify the correct writing trait that is being described: I received a 1 on my paper because I lacked a clear sense of direction! Whoa! Iā??m going to have to work harder.
organization
ideas and content
voice
4.Identify the correct writing trait that is being described: I received a 5 on my paper because I used clear, visual, and accurate descriptions. I used strong verbs and great adjectives and adverbs. I really choose my words well!
word choice
conventions
sentence fluency
5.Identify the correct writing trait that is being described: I received a 1 on my paper because I didnā??t have good sense of where to stop and end. I used the same word to begin all of my thoughts. Yikes! I need help in this department.
word choice
conventions
sentence fluency
6.Identify the correct writing trait that is being described: I received a 3 on my paper because I had a lot of grammatical errors, but not enough to distract the reader from understanding my meaning. I guess next time Iā??ll have to proofread better and have someone help me edit.
word choice
conventions
sentence fluency
From the following selection of To Kill a Mockingbird, identify the underlined part of speech
7.Then I heard Atticus cough. I held my breath. Sometimes when we made a midnight pilgrimage to the bathroom we would find him reading. He said he often woke up during the night, checked on us, and read himself back to sleep. I waited for his light to go on, straining my eyes to see it flood the hall. It stayed off, and I breathed again.
interjection
conjunction
preposition
adjective
8.Then I heard Atticus cough. I held my breath. Sometimes when we made a midnight pilgrimage to the bathroom we would find him reading. He said he often woke up during the night, checked on us, and read himself back to sleep. I waited for his light to go on, straining my eyes to see it flood the hall. It stayed off, and I breathed again.
interjection
conjunction
preposition
adjective
9.Then I heard Atticus cough. I held my breath. Sometimes when we made a midnight pilgrimage to the bathroom we would find him reading. He said he often woke up during the night, checked on us, and read himself back to sleep. I waited for his light to go on, straining my eyes to see it flood the hall. It stayed off, and I breathed again.
interjection
conjunction
preposition
adjective
10.Then I heard Atticus cough. I held my breath. Sometimes when we made a midnight pilgrimage to the bathroom we would find him reading. He said he often woke up during the night, checked on us, and read himself back to sleep. I waited for his light to go on, straining my eyes to see it flood the hall. It stayed off, and I breathed again.
interjection
conjunction
preposition
adjective
From the following selection of To Kill a Mockingbird, identify the part of speech that is underlined.
11.. . .and that he was patiently awaiting an opportunity to reward me. He did, by pushing the tire down the sidewalk with all the force in his body. Ground, sky and houses melted into a mad palette, my ears throbbed, I was suffocating. I could not put out my hands to stop, they were wedged between my chest and knees
noun
pronoun
verb
adverb
12.. . .and that he was patiently awaiting an opportunity to reward me. He did, by pushing the tire down the sidewalk with all the force in his body. Ground, sky and houses melted into a mad palette, my ears throbbed, I was suffocating. I could not put out my hands to stop, they were wedged between my chest and knees.
noun
pronoun
verb
adverb
13.. . .and that he was patiently awaiting an opportunity to reward me. He did, by pushing the tire down the sidewalk with all the force in his body. Ground, sky and houses melted into a mad palette, my ears throbbed, I was suffocating. I could not put out my hands to stop, they were wedged between my chest and knees.
noun
pronoun
verb
adverb
14.. . .and that he was patiently awaiting an opportunity to reward me. He did, by pushing the tire down the sidewalk with all the force in his body. Ground, sky and houses melted into a mad palette, my ears throbbed, I was suffocating. I could not put out my hands to stop, they were wedged between my chest and knees.
noun
pronoun
verb
adverb
From the following selection of To Kill a Mockingbird, identify the literary term that is underlined.
15.We strolled silently down the sidewalk, listening to the porch swings creaking with the weight of the neighborhood, listening to the soft night-murmurs of the grown people on our street. Occasionally we heard Miss Stephanie Crawford laugh.
alliteration
sensory
hyperbole
mood
16.We strolled silently down the sidewalk, listening to the porch swings creaking with the weight of the neighborhood, listening to the soft night-murmurs of the grown people on our street. Occasionally we heard Miss Stephanie Crawford laugh
alliteration
sensory
hyperbole
mood
17.We strolled silently down the sidewalk, listening to the porch swings creaking with the weight of the neighborhood, listening to the soft night-murmurs of the grown people on our street. Occasionally we heard Miss Stephanie Crawford laugh.
alliteration
sensory
hyperbole
mood
18.Using the following quotes from The Hidden Songs of a Secret Soul, identify the literary term that is being used within the quote.
"Lenny was a thin, slight man in his middle forties with a stammer and a sad face."
imagery
simile
metaphor
personification
19."They were music."
imagery
simile
metaphor
personification
Using the following quote from "Freedom," identify the literary term that is being used within the quote.
20."Freedom is a strong seed planted in a great need."
imagery
simile
metaphor
personification
Using the following quote from "Strange Fruit," identify the literary term that is being used within the quote.
21.". . .for the wind to suck."
imagery
simile
metaphor
personification
Using the following quote from Kennedy's speech, identify the literary term that is being used within the quote.
22.". . .fires of frustration and discord are burning in every city."
symbol
irony
allusion
mood
23.In the speech by John F. Kennedy, he begins by talking about improper acts being committed against black Americans. Improper could also be called:
condescend
illicit
diminutive
arbitrate
24.In the speech by Andrew Cuomo, he talks about discrimination with a smile and modern-day discrimination. Even though they are more secret kinds of discrimination, Cuomo believes these hidden acts of discrimination are ____________ just the same.
amiable
aloof
iniquities
placid
25.In the song "Strange Fruit," Lewis Allan believes that the some people in the South are __________ because they wish to physically harm people of color.
contentious
malevolent
condescend
iniquity

Anonymous
08-24-2005, 08:40 PM
LMFAO!!!!!!!!

NightProwler
08-24-2005, 09:19 PM
...dude, how long did that take to type?? you'd better hop u get some responses

gildong.
08-24-2005, 09:23 PM
i know man...its long n stuff..but for ppl who know wat they r doing,, it should be quick..cuz its just multiple choice..LOL..but i do hope i get some serious responses..

PotSm0key
08-24-2005, 09:46 PM
1) Ideas and content.
2) Voice.

im done for now.

Button Basher
08-24-2005, 10:05 PM
Damn, I thought i'd be able to help but I never did traits in English. :mad: Sorry man.

ermitonto
08-24-2005, 10:12 PM
19 & 20 are metaphor.

Shredfest
08-24-2005, 10:47 PM
3.ideas and content

Shredfest
08-24-2005, 10:50 PM
4.word choice

Shredfest
08-24-2005, 10:51 PM
5.sentence fluency i think if not conventions.

Shredfest
08-24-2005, 10:52 PM
6.conventions or sentence fluency once again, im nto too sure what conventions are so if someon can clear that up ill know

ermitonto
08-24-2005, 11:02 PM
23. illicit
24. iniquities
25. malevolent

NextGen
08-25-2005, 02:00 AM
18. imagery
19.metaphor

ADaisyChain
08-25-2005, 02:44 AM
20 metaphor

dunno 21

22Symbol

ermitonto
08-25-2005, 02:57 AM
21. personification

ermitonto
08-25-2005, 03:01 AM
It would really help to know which words are the underlined ones.

SomeGuy
08-25-2005, 03:17 AM
come on this is really easy stuff..he needs to learn it instewad of us doing it all for him....or at least in my opinion...

NightProwler
08-25-2005, 04:12 AM
18 is immagry
edit:never mind i see someone beat me to it

gildong.
08-25-2005, 04:25 AM
hey you guys..thnx..i finished it n i came back and saw so many posts! im really greatful you guys are here for me even if this is a cannabis website :P....anyways..yea i just check what everyone thought about the answers n i got em almost all right :] thanks again!!!! NO MORE ANSWERS NEED :PP

red662
08-26-2005, 03:33 AM
jesus even attemtin 2 read that reminds me how happy i am i left school some 12 year ago thnk god,lol

Melton420
08-27-2005, 01:30 AM
SHUT UP I JUST GRADUATED AND IM DONE NO HOMEWORK SO SHUT UP YOU GAVE ME A HEADACHE .... LOL JK DUNNNO MAN DONT KNOW WHAT TO TELL YA