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katisse
05-03-2005, 06:24 AM
when i look into the mirror,
see my eyes looking back at me,
i dont know what i am
or who im s'posed to be...
am i who i was at 7?
or even 17?
or in some metamorphosis
that i cant grasp it seems?
perhaps i'll find the answer
when this body fades to dust
and the enigma of myself
will be clarified and just...
for this flesh is not the answer
nor that which makes me whole...
i am more than this image peering back
instead a reflection of my soul.

kat


Ever really look at your own eyes? really let them look back at you? Its LIke being recognized by you as something else.

Hydrizzle
05-03-2005, 06:52 AM
u gotta be a fireman

Stedric
05-03-2005, 06:54 AM
I don't get Hydrizzle's comment...but good stuff.

Smokin2
05-03-2005, 07:55 AM
Wow, excellent poetry.
Wish I had talent like that. Since I don't I will simply enjoy the talent's of those such as yourself. Thanks for sharing. ;)

Darkneon420
05-03-2005, 08:51 AM
:D I feel like that all the time...not exactly like that but somewhat...I mean who am I? Looking in the mirror is really weird...other times I just dont care. Great poem kat!. And welcome to the forum :)

JSTA
05-03-2005, 09:27 AM
That was really good. :)

katisse
05-04-2005, 12:19 PM
Thx all...:)
Happy to be here among fellow stoners.

jimbones
05-04-2005, 12:51 PM
the eyes are the window to your soul it,s easy to stare into your own eyes if your conscience is clear peace

sToNeDpEnGuIn420
05-04-2005, 08:54 PM
Kat wth is ur avatar lol it looks like a ferret that has water come out of it or some shit lol

katisse
05-05-2005, 12:13 PM
I'll be damned if I know...I was stoned and (at that time) thought...wow, that is so cool. I dont know what it is, but I got it off a site of anime called shamanic princess. Keep looking, theres no telling what I might come up with. lol