BlAzInIt4:20
07-01-2007, 07:33 AM
Long I know, Im very stoned and a story came to mind.... something i wrote..
Mods- you said we can write any kind of story and if this is to graphic go ahead and erase it, and i will say sorry now :-)
This story takes place in this little old hick town on the south boarder of Dakota in the fields. The trees are green and the houses are old. The town consist of maybe 500 people, some come and go or turn up missing. People in this town believe their is a murder amongst them. Every now and then the town will call a meeting to hear everyones point of view on the subject.
During one meeting one of the protesters never showed up, her name was Carla. Carla was the head protester of the community. So naturally everyone noticed she was missing. They waited two days then started to search the woods where all the other victims have been found. Flyer's go up in town to get the word out about missing Carla.
Marching through the woods are 400+ people, and half way through they come to find a discovery that will ruin them forever. Everyone gazed upon a half mile stretch of bodies all lined up perfectly in a row and also preserved pretty well. How can this be? The woods were search a month ago saids the lead sheriff. Where could all these people come from? and why does it not smell?
back at the office the sheriff is calling the fedds in. He has no idea how to handle this situation and is falling completely apart. The town is wide awake with fear, peering through their windows to watch the boarders of the house. The children are in their basements reading story's with mom. Most of the towns men are putting together hunts, to go and hunt this murder. And most of all the axed murder is lurking right in front of them.
Carlas family is now going through all the picture of the victims. Seeing torn open body's, slashed throats, and brushed woman who have been killed in malicious ways. The family has chosen 5 possible victims to be carla, but the body's are beating so badly they can not tell if it is surly her. We are going to have to do a DNA test on all 5 vicitms Mrs.Holt we are going to need your blood.
At home awaiting the test results the family of Carla, is starting to break down with tears. Everyone is in the same room and its about 2 miles to the next house. Mrs. holt decides to make tea to calm everyone down. While in the kitchen Mrs.holt is stirring the tea, her head is suddenly sliced open. Falling to her knees with the tea still in hand. The axed murder then steps on the ax and pushes it deeper into her head. The family hears everything and is now hiding in the house.
As the axed murder walks through the house he is peering into every nook and cranny . listening for foot steps, or sounds of someone breathing. He finds the father hiding under the bed, and quickly grabs him. He says not one word but looks him in the eyes. Holding him by his neck he raises a blade as long as 12inches. He slowly stabs the father in the stomach and turning. He then reaches the middle and twistes the knife out fast causing him to cut his insides. The father falls to the ground dead, and his daughter was watching the whole time from the closet. The axed murder then cleans off his knife and continues with his search. The closet is then reached and he can hear the heart beat of this girl. the murder waves the knife in front of the door hearing her heart beat even faster. slowly he opens the door with the knife, looking upon this child. he then grabs her and ties her up.
As the axed murder is tieing up the daughter, the brother runs in with a bat swinging at all angles. Quickly the murder responds by slicing his throat. The dead brother falls upon his sister who is still tired up. Continuing his search he shuts the door and walks down the hall. Walking through a hallway filled with nothing but pictures. Its looks as if it goes on forever, but then finally he walks to a door.
Opening the door he entered a room that looks like an art room. Knowing he only has Mrs.Holt left to kill he figures she will be in this room. he locks the door behind him as he enters and calls out her name. he then switches one light on so itheir is some light in the room. As the axed murder walks between the art, Mrs.Holt has already gone running out the front door.
The Axed murder realizes that Mrs.Holt is not home. So he runs to his truck axe in hand and plans to catch her running on the side of the road. He floors it and runs all over the flowers in the front yard, skidding onto the street. Along the way he happen to catch up to her with only a half mile to town he then gases his truck and aims right for her. Sliding her body across the ground with his truck he crashes into the trees in front of him, slamming his head into the windshield.
Four hours later the neighbor drove by and came across the wreck. Finding Mrs.Holt splattered upon the ground and a beat up truck slammed into a tree. The neighbor looked for the driver but he was never found...
Mods- you said we can write any kind of story and if this is to graphic go ahead and erase it, and i will say sorry now :-)
This story takes place in this little old hick town on the south boarder of Dakota in the fields. The trees are green and the houses are old. The town consist of maybe 500 people, some come and go or turn up missing. People in this town believe their is a murder amongst them. Every now and then the town will call a meeting to hear everyones point of view on the subject.
During one meeting one of the protesters never showed up, her name was Carla. Carla was the head protester of the community. So naturally everyone noticed she was missing. They waited two days then started to search the woods where all the other victims have been found. Flyer's go up in town to get the word out about missing Carla.
Marching through the woods are 400+ people, and half way through they come to find a discovery that will ruin them forever. Everyone gazed upon a half mile stretch of bodies all lined up perfectly in a row and also preserved pretty well. How can this be? The woods were search a month ago saids the lead sheriff. Where could all these people come from? and why does it not smell?
back at the office the sheriff is calling the fedds in. He has no idea how to handle this situation and is falling completely apart. The town is wide awake with fear, peering through their windows to watch the boarders of the house. The children are in their basements reading story's with mom. Most of the towns men are putting together hunts, to go and hunt this murder. And most of all the axed murder is lurking right in front of them.
Carlas family is now going through all the picture of the victims. Seeing torn open body's, slashed throats, and brushed woman who have been killed in malicious ways. The family has chosen 5 possible victims to be carla, but the body's are beating so badly they can not tell if it is surly her. We are going to have to do a DNA test on all 5 vicitms Mrs.Holt we are going to need your blood.
At home awaiting the test results the family of Carla, is starting to break down with tears. Everyone is in the same room and its about 2 miles to the next house. Mrs. holt decides to make tea to calm everyone down. While in the kitchen Mrs.holt is stirring the tea, her head is suddenly sliced open. Falling to her knees with the tea still in hand. The axed murder then steps on the ax and pushes it deeper into her head. The family hears everything and is now hiding in the house.
As the axed murder walks through the house he is peering into every nook and cranny . listening for foot steps, or sounds of someone breathing. He finds the father hiding under the bed, and quickly grabs him. He says not one word but looks him in the eyes. Holding him by his neck he raises a blade as long as 12inches. He slowly stabs the father in the stomach and turning. He then reaches the middle and twistes the knife out fast causing him to cut his insides. The father falls to the ground dead, and his daughter was watching the whole time from the closet. The axed murder then cleans off his knife and continues with his search. The closet is then reached and he can hear the heart beat of this girl. the murder waves the knife in front of the door hearing her heart beat even faster. slowly he opens the door with the knife, looking upon this child. he then grabs her and ties her up.
As the axed murder is tieing up the daughter, the brother runs in with a bat swinging at all angles. Quickly the murder responds by slicing his throat. The dead brother falls upon his sister who is still tired up. Continuing his search he shuts the door and walks down the hall. Walking through a hallway filled with nothing but pictures. Its looks as if it goes on forever, but then finally he walks to a door.
Opening the door he entered a room that looks like an art room. Knowing he only has Mrs.Holt left to kill he figures she will be in this room. he locks the door behind him as he enters and calls out her name. he then switches one light on so itheir is some light in the room. As the axed murder walks between the art, Mrs.Holt has already gone running out the front door.
The Axed murder realizes that Mrs.Holt is not home. So he runs to his truck axe in hand and plans to catch her running on the side of the road. He floors it and runs all over the flowers in the front yard, skidding onto the street. Along the way he happen to catch up to her with only a half mile to town he then gases his truck and aims right for her. Sliding her body across the ground with his truck he crashes into the trees in front of him, slamming his head into the windshield.
Four hours later the neighbor drove by and came across the wreck. Finding Mrs.Holt splattered upon the ground and a beat up truck slammed into a tree. The neighbor looked for the driver but he was never found...