your opinion.....

[systemofadown]

would be greatly appreciated. Please tell me what you think of this.

Putfile - Living my own lie (http://media.putfile.com/Living-my-own-lie)

Thanks..

BTW Everything was done by me.

[BakedDaily0420]

Now dont get mad at me but it sounds a little emo and i dont like emo music at all.

[thcbongman]

Your voice doesn't suit what you are playing......it would actually be pretty good with a guy with a wispy voice.

[DonnieDarko]

Overall I like it alot ... there are parts when the music seems to drown out the vocals ... which may be intentional, but I tend to lose the message of the lyrics ...

It is amazing that you created this youself .. I'd like to hear more ..

[systemofadown]

well you can check out more at www.myspace.com/dustinleew (http://www.myspace.com/dustinleew)

[Phresher than it Got]

its pretty lame dude
sounds like you used fruity loops for the drums
the guitar and bass are mediocre, and the vocals are weak and have no strong melody
plus, like BakedDaily said, its hella emo, so even more points deducted

and yeah, the production quality is shit, but hey, sounds like your just starting off







dont quit your day job i guess

[bucknuts1870]

variations on the theme. It's to predictable, everything fits neatly. Mix it up and play it up one key, or throw in a nice pentatonic lick. Double stops on the 4th measure before a chorus are a favorite of mine...plus it is pretty damn emo which is hella lame.

Practice, musicians today tend to try to get by on, well idunno really what it boggles me still, but nobody gives a damn about being a good, well rounded, intelligent musician. They just want to play a few power chords and get by on emotion alone.

[Phresher than it Got]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

that too:)

[lsdreamz]

its pretty lame dude
sounds like you used fruity loops for the drums
the guitar and bass are mediocre, and the vocals are weak and have no strong melody
plus, like BakedDaily said, its hella emo, so even more points deducted

and yeah, the production quality is shit, but hey, sounds like your just starting off







dont quit your day job i guess


i dont think that shits fair i mean the tune bored me but if its ur kind of thing then il allow it. just speak for urself man

[systemofadown]

its pretty lame dude
sounds like you used fruity loops for the drums
the guitar and bass are mediocre, and the vocals are weak and have no strong melody
plus, like BakedDaily said, its hella emo, so even more points deducted

and yeah, the production quality is shit, but hey, sounds like your just starting off







dont quit your day job i guess

You're a dumbass. Do you seriously think I'll take you seriously when you can't even tell real drums from fruity loops?